Well... It looks a little flat. Anything that you could do to help the images pop out a little bit? Perhaps a drop shadow on either the text or the ducks, maybe even just some additional shading to add to the 3d look?
Professional opinion: Eyes and beak look rough and coarse, mabye a little more stylized and yes, drop shadows. Top font looks Nintendo retro, but using the same font on the bottom looks decidedly non-pro, I'd use a different font alltogether. Lastly, JPG compression is nasty, don't let it touch your proofs at all.
Not too hot on how long the business name is, but it's your call, also westy can grammar police me if im wrong, but I think the top should read:
Star Citizen is an upcoming persistent-universe space simulator being created by Chris Roberts (veteran of the Wing Commander...